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Fries or peas? Fries, obviously! Although a plate full of fries seems much more delightful than eating a plate of peas, there are many consequences that come along with eating unhealthy foods (like fries). According to Scholastic Scope, schools across the nation have been considering whether or not to suppress junk food from school lunches and vending machines. People now a days tend to ignore the negative effects of having a diet that consists of mainly junk food. Eating unhealthy can lead to obesity, health problems, and a low attention-span during class. Overall, unhealthy foods should be banned from all schools.
Fries or peas? Fries, obviously! Although a plate full of fries seems much more delightful than eating a plate of peas, there are many consequences that come along with eating unhealthy foods (like fries). According to Scholastic Scope, schools across the nation have been considering whether or not to suppress junk food from school lunches and vending machines. People now a days tend to ignore the negative effects of having a diet that consists of mainly junk food. Eating unhealthy can lead to obesity, health problems, and a low attention-span during class. Overall, unhealthy foods should be banned from all schools.
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When it comes to the act of bullying, every person has either played the role of the victim, or even the bully himself. Nonetheless, everyone has either been bullied or has bullied another. Although bullying is emphasized enough as it as, people everywhere still continue to do it anyway. In the article of “All Bullies are Criminals” it states that on January 14th, 2010, a 15 year old girl named Phoebe Prince committed suicide in result of being bullied for a total of 3 months. The outcomes of bullying can lead to suicide, health problems , and a decrease in academic achievement. A way to completely exterminate these issues would be to create a consequential punishment so severe that no child will ever want to bully another, again.
When it comes to the act of bullying, every person has either played the role of the victim, or even the bully himself. Nonetheless, everyone has either been bullied or has bullied another. Although bullying is emphasized enough as it as, people everywhere still continue to do it anyway. In the article of “All Bullies are Criminals” it states that on January 14th, 2010, a 15 year old girl named Phoebe Prince committed suicide in result of being bullied for a total of 3 months. The outcomes of bullying can lead to suicide, health problems , and a decrease in academic achievement. A way to completely exterminate these issues would be to create a consequential punishment so severe that no child will ever want to bully another, again.
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According to Ryot News & Action, on February 27th, 2014, an astronaut nearly drowned to death while in outer space. Sadly, this horrifying event is just one of the many outbreaks that have taken place while traveling through space. In the article of "Your next Vacation: Outer Space?", it states how anyone who pays $200,000 is able to proceed onto a three hour space trip 65 miles out into the sky. Although this opportunity sounds like an amazing experience, there are still multiple ramifications, such as, the dangers of outer space, the cost of the trip, and the amount of training required. With these ramifications, space vacations should be strongly discouraged and unavailable to the public.
According to Ryot News & Action, on February 27th, 2014, an astronaut nearly drowned to death while in outer space. Sadly, this horrifying event is just one of the many outbreaks that have taken place while traveling through space. In the article of "Your next Vacation: Outer Space?", it states how anyone who pays $200,000 is able to proceed onto a three hour space trip 65 miles out into the sky. Although this opportunity sounds like an amazing experience, there are still multiple ramifications, such as, the dangers of outer space, the cost of the trip, and the amount of training required. With these ramifications, space vacations should be strongly discouraged and unavailable to the public.